What're Luna and her dad doing here? Is this that farmhouse they mentioned on the drive to Dia De Los Muertos? Stupid alternate universes and Eternum servers cropping up in my games...
Centoria is really like a ghost xD she is there but doesn't seem to be noticed by the people around her, in chapter 11 i always paid attention to her throughout the story like it was love at first sight, but even the MC didn't seem to have any interest at all in Centoria like WTH, seriously?? In your group there is an Elf with extraordinary charm and you don't even notice her
If i were in the MC's group with a friend from my genmate like Centoria, i wouldn't have to think twice about making her the first target of a harem girl to order her to spread her thighs on the bed
No, Google Drive doesn't pay anyone anything. It's a personal file storage solution, and it really isn't intended for mass distribution. If more than a few people download it over a short period of time, it shuts down distribution for a day. That's why almost everybody distributes with one of the other services like Mega.
I seem to keep getting the same thing every time I try to download the zip. This same error has happened with a couple attempts to download this title in the past. Too moany people attempting to download or has been downloaded too many times please try again later
Heyo. I've been enjoying this "game" of yours and I'm excited for the next update.
If I can be so bold as to give you some constructive criticism: Don't give the player a "choice" if there is no choice. A button that just says "forward" and no other buttons to press offers nothing mechanically or for story telling that the normal click/enter/spacebar couldn't have done as well.
I stumbled over this game as it was part of the romance bundle and have to admit that I nearly did not play it.
The "penis as a third arm" aesthetics is a huge 'nope' for me and I instinctively closed the game very early on (the lake scene, when the MC was shown for the first time naked). I only started it again as I read Axphyxia's note here in the comments ("unexpectedly, the game turns out to be very good and fun") and I gave it a second chance.
What should I say: The plot is well-designed and the story, while not ground-breaking, a good read. Fortunately you opted to not use the oh-so-stupid penis as main plot device for your visuals and I'm having, unexpectedly [:)], fun with the game.
Have a few typos, depending on your PoV a compensation for the criticism in my post or to add insult to injury :D
./chapter_7.rpy:4385: agains->against
./chapter_10.rpy:3250: agressive->aggressive
./script.rpy:14168: appologies->apologies
./stats__lore.rpy:3262: assualt->assault
./stats__lore.rpy:3293: assualt->assault
./chapter_5.rpy:1765: becuase->because
./chapter_7.rpy:2158: benificial->beneficial
./chapter_7.rpy:2167: benificial->beneficial
./chapter_7.rpy:2323: benificial->beneficial
./chapter_7.rpy:2332: benificial->beneficial
./chapter_7.rpy:5678: consistant->consistent
./chapter_7.rpy:5790: consistant->consistent
./chapter_5.rpy:1618: discribe->describe
./script.rpy:11818: dissapeared->disappeared
./chapter_8.rpy:4337: everthing->everything
./script.rpy:4021: existance->existence
./stats__lore.rpy:3061: fourties->forties
./stats__lore.rpy:3011: fourty->forty
./stats__lore.rpy:3098: fourty->forty
./chapter_5.rpy:3612: harrassing->harassing
./chapter_9.rpy:818: heared->heard
./chapter_8.rpy:941: layed->laid
./stats__lore.rpy:2808: lefted->left
./chapter_9.rpy:4631: loosing->losing
./chapter_9.rpy:4971: loosing->losing
./chapter_10.rpy:4898: loosing->losing
./chapter_6.rpy:317: occurr->occur
./chapter_7.rpy:1399: paticular->particular
./script.rpy:20215: potatos->potatoes
./chapter_6.rpy:1259: powerfull->powerful
./chapter_9.rpy:537: proccess->process
./chapter_9.rpy:650: recieve->receive
./chapter_7.rpy:1589: recieved->received
./chapter_7.rpy:1445: recieves->receives
./chapter_7.rpy:1449: recieves->receives
./chapter_7.rpy:1305: recieving->receiving
./script.rpy:25915: seeked->sought
./chapter_7.rpy:1418: seperate->separate
./script.rpy:11680: seperated->separated
./script.rpy:11684: seperated->separated
./script.rpy:21067: seperating->separating
./chapter_8.rpy:2609: temperture->temperature
./chapter_7.rpy:1483: thier->their
./chapter_7.rpy:1355: unforseen->unforeseen
./chapter_6.rpy:2333: untill->until
----
edited to add:
* Athena's character info spoils the plot: one can read "Connection to you: You disobayed her, killing her fury and ending the curse of the town of the faceless god." before all of that happened [btw, 'disobeyed', not 'disobayed']
* it seems you use "$ dummy +=1" as no op in menus, if/else blocks and similar (as "do nothing" function to have a valid indented code snippet). renpy has a built-in function for this: "pass"
* you know https://www.renpy.org/doc/html/developer_tools.html#lint ? not every output is an actual bug and it covers best practices, too. but it still helps to ship a better product, noteworthy are some jumps to non-existing labels
Heh, got a few "strongly put comments" on the third leg topic and I'm immune to them now XD Thanks for your comment tho, it's mostly nice rly XD Also, thanks a lot for pointing out the typos 🥰
Unexpectedly, the game turns out to be very good and fun, players are not required to have to play the MC to be kind and innocent, the MC knows what he is doing and wanted so far. I really like it when the creators give players the choice to act as MC throughout the game
Btw Toni reminded me to the character in 'Once in a Lifetime'(I forgot his name) can be anything, anywhere, unpredictable lmao, the appearance of Luna and Mr.Hernandez was also quite enjoyable. Will there be any new surprises with the appearance of the Dildoman? xD
I just have one question, does the MC not get a scene with Centoria? Cuz in current update until the end of the game i only got 1 respect from Centoria(if i remember correctly)
This is very good. Thank you for the game. Much graphic effort put in the characters, and many supporting characters are developed. Lore and worldbuilding are exciting.
One small thing is that the MC's powers come too easily to him, and less attention is given to the development of his other ninja skills.
Thanks! Welp, not a big fan of MC fights villain, MC loses, MC trains, MC beats villain this time, new villain shows up, MC fights villain, MC loses, MC trains, MC beats villain this time, and repeat. But also, my MC presumably being a demi-god who only practiced sword fighting until now and knew nothing about his abilities which he's only now discovering as he has to fight for his life explains the rapid growth IMO.
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Android port?
It's unofficial but you can try this one:
https://mdfx9dc8n.net/f/0v09q4jjimogqx
Great game, really enjoying the references. The Dr. Kreiger one caught me off guard
Thank you!
Any plans to port to Android???
There are unofficial ports, I didn't make them tho, try this:
https://mdfx9dc8n.net/f/0v09q4jjimogqx
What're Luna and her dad doing here? Is this that farmhouse they mentioned on the drive to Dia De Los Muertos? Stupid alternate universes and Eternum servers cropping up in my games...
Lol yes they are XD
未来会有安卓版本吗？
I wanted to try this but sadly i can't even download it and can't even join discord for some reason
So can u fix it? Or provide some new link to to dl and join dc thanks!
Interesting, there are several download links attached, did you try them all?
Try this link for discord:
https://discord.gg/Gdc3HUMZgQ
Nvm that it finally worked! after many errors days trying. so thx i appreciate it mate!
I really like the game, impatiently waiting for new chapters.
And I really wanna fugg Yumi, Tamara and Venus...
Torr still best girl. Alongside Misty.
Thank you! Soon, soon...
Really interested in playing, but download file exceeded too many downloads. Any chance for another link?
Exceeded too many downloads? You're unable to download it?
Yeah, tried about 3 times. Told me to try again later.
I posted a few more links, some should work now.
Appreciate you mate
Centoria is really like a ghost xD she is there but doesn't seem to be noticed by the people around her, in chapter 11 i always paid attention to her throughout the story like it was love at first sight, but even the MC didn't seem to have any interest at all in Centoria like WTH, seriously?? In your group there is an Elf with extraordinary charm and you don't even notice her
If i were in the MC's group with a friend from my genmate like Centoria, i wouldn't have to think twice about making her the first target of a harem girl to order her to spread her thighs on the bed
Any chance of a non-Google-Drive link? You've been over their download quota for at least a couple of days now.
On the brigth side that means the game has a good visibility/follower group and that the dev may get a revenue out of it.
I wonder if G-drive pays the content creator for each attempted download. If they do that's probably next to nothing mind you, but...
On the downside that's dowloads AND checks quota. Wich means the more we check if/when the game is available the more we restart the countdown.
No, Google Drive doesn't pay anyone anything. It's a personal file storage solution, and it really isn't intended for mass distribution. If more than a few people download it over a short period of time, it shuts down distribution for a day. That's why almost everybody distributes with one of the other services like Mega.
Interresting input. Mega isn't without it's own set of issues though.
I'll upload more links ASAP. Sorry about that...
Yo, this is one of the best that I've ever played. I think I will put this in my top 5. Keep up the good work hehe can't wait for more updates
Thank you!
I seem to keep getting the same thing every time I try to download the zip. This same error has happened with a couple attempts to download this title in the past. Too moany people attempting to download or has been downloaded too many times please try again later
Seems google drive has this issue, I actually didn't know, I'll upload more links ASAP.
much appreciated, Id love to try your title!
Sorry, really stupid question but what game engine you're using? Renpy, Tyrano, etc...?
Renpy.
When will chapter 11 be available here?
On the 1st of November.
Unless I forget to post it ofc XD
Okay thanks for the reply.
Looking forward to what happens next!
Love this game.
please add more fetishes. Like sharing
Thanks! But nah I'm good XD
Also amazing game not many with dis kind of setup and story
Thank you!
Dude how do I beat Tamara and candy I can beat candy but Tamara's a pain in the ass
Try this:
Okay so for the first 3 minutes: tamara's foot, tamara's armpit, tamara's pussy, candy's boobs.
4th minute: tamara's foot, tamara's armpit, tamara's boobs, candy's pussy
5th minute: tamara's foot, tamara's armpit, tamara's boobs, and only those.
Thx and is the next update near?
Yup, coming out for Patrons this weekend.
Heyo.
I've been enjoying this "game" of yours and I'm excited for the next update.
If I can be so bold as to give you some constructive criticism:
Don't give the player a "choice" if there is no choice.
A button that just says "forward" and no other buttons to press offers nothing mechanically or for story telling that the normal click/enter/spacebar couldn't have done as well.
Anywho, keep up the good work. It's appreciated.
Thank you! :)
Yup, the forward button thingy isn't around any more in later chapters.
Splendid!
I stumbled over this game as it was part of the romance bundle and have to admit that I nearly did not play it.
The "penis as a third arm" aesthetics is a huge 'nope' for me and I instinctively closed the game very early on (the lake scene, when the MC was shown for the first time naked). I only started it again as I read Axphyxia's note here in the comments ("unexpectedly, the game turns out to be very good and fun") and I gave it a second chance.
What should I say: The plot is well-designed and the story, while not ground-breaking, a good read. Fortunately you opted to not use the oh-so-stupid penis as main plot device for your visuals and I'm having, unexpectedly [:)], fun with the game.
Have a few typos, depending on your PoV a compensation for the criticism in my post or to add insult to injury :D
./chapter_7.rpy:4385: agains->against
./chapter_10.rpy:3250: agressive->aggressive
./script.rpy:14168: appologies->apologies
./stats__lore.rpy:3262: assualt->assault
./stats__lore.rpy:3293: assualt->assault
./chapter_5.rpy:1765: becuase->because
./chapter_7.rpy:2158: benificial->beneficial
./chapter_7.rpy:2167: benificial->beneficial
./chapter_7.rpy:2323: benificial->beneficial
./chapter_7.rpy:2332: benificial->beneficial
./chapter_7.rpy:5678: consistant->consistent
./chapter_7.rpy:5790: consistant->consistent
./chapter_5.rpy:1618: discribe->describe
./script.rpy:11818: dissapeared->disappeared
./chapter_8.rpy:4337: everthing->everything
./script.rpy:4021: existance->existence
./stats__lore.rpy:3061: fourties->forties
./stats__lore.rpy:3011: fourty->forty
./stats__lore.rpy:3098: fourty->forty
./chapter_5.rpy:3612: harrassing->harassing
./chapter_9.rpy:818: heared->heard
./chapter_8.rpy:941: layed->laid
./stats__lore.rpy:2808: lefted->left
./chapter_9.rpy:4631: loosing->losing
./chapter_9.rpy:4971: loosing->losing
./chapter_10.rpy:4898: loosing->losing
./chapter_6.rpy:317: occurr->occur
./chapter_7.rpy:1399: paticular->particular
./script.rpy:20215: potatos->potatoes
./chapter_6.rpy:1259: powerfull->powerful
./chapter_9.rpy:537: proccess->process
./chapter_9.rpy:650: recieve->receive
./chapter_7.rpy:1589: recieved->received
./chapter_7.rpy:1445: recieves->receives
./chapter_7.rpy:1449: recieves->receives
./chapter_7.rpy:1305: recieving->receiving
./script.rpy:25915: seeked->sought
./chapter_7.rpy:1418: seperate->separate
./script.rpy:11680: seperated->separated
./script.rpy:11684: seperated->separated
./script.rpy:21067: seperating->separating
./chapter_8.rpy:2609: temperture->temperature
./chapter_7.rpy:1483: thier->their
./chapter_7.rpy:1355: unforseen->unforeseen
./chapter_6.rpy:2333: untill->until
----
edited to add:
* Athena's character info spoils the plot: one can read "Connection to you: You disobayed her, killing her fury and ending the curse of the town of the faceless god." before all of that happened [btw, 'disobeyed', not 'disobayed']
* it seems you use "$ dummy +=1" as no op in menus, if/else blocks and similar (as "do nothing" function to have a valid indented code snippet). renpy has a built-in function for this: "pass"
* you know https://www.renpy.org/doc/html/developer_tools.html#lint ? not every output is an actual bug and it covers best practices, too. but it still helps to ship a better product, noteworthy are some jumps to non-existing labels
Heh, got a few "strongly put comments" on the third leg topic and I'm immune to them now XD
Thanks for your comment tho, it's mostly nice rly XD
Also, thanks a lot for pointing out the typos 🥰
> immune to them now
learning by pain, eh?
it's cue, not queue, btw :P (chapter_5.rpy:2514)
Damn, you've really come a long way huh? It's really impressive to be pumping out chapters with stats like those.
Thank you!
Also...
Sup! Been a while, I hope you're doing well...
Unexpectedly, the game turns out to be very good and fun, players are not required to have to play the MC to be kind and innocent, the MC knows what he is doing and wanted so far. I really like it when the creators give players the choice to act as MC throughout the game
Btw Toni reminded me to the character in 'Once in a Lifetime'(I forgot his name) can be anything, anywhere, unpredictable lmao, the appearance of Luna and Mr.Hernandez was also quite enjoyable. Will there be any new surprises with the appearance of the Dildoman? xD
I just have one question, does the MC not get a scene with Centoria? Cuz in current update until the end of the game i only got 1 respect from Centoria(if i remember correctly)
Thank you!
I'm a big fan of Caribdis's work as you can probably tell XD
And nope, no scenes with Centoria so far.
This is very good. Thank you for the game. Much graphic effort put in the characters, and many supporting characters are developed. Lore and worldbuilding are exciting.
One small thing is that the MC's powers come too easily to him, and less attention is given to the development of his other ninja skills.
Thanks!
Welp, not a big fan of MC fights villain, MC loses, MC trains, MC beats villain this time, new villain shows up, MC fights villain, MC loses, MC trains, MC beats villain this time, and repeat. But also, my MC presumably being a demi-god who only practiced sword fighting until now and knew nothing about his abilities which he's only now discovering as he has to fight for his life explains the rapid growth IMO.
Is there any impregnation/pregnancy content yet?
No, not just yet.